Cover
On the cover, I found that I wasn't liking the background colour because it didn't make the magazine look professional so I looked on Google to see if there were any RnB magazines that had black backgrounds on them and compared them to my magazine cover.
The picture above shows the magazine cover I found on Google and I compared this magazine cover and my magazine cover.
This is the comparison I have made for both magazines and it seems that they both stand out but I just need to change the font for the red writing as I can't read them.
Contents page
I find that the contents page stands out a lot although maybe I should change the background colour as I don't want to stick with a black background for all my pages. On the other hand, I find that the black makes everything stand out and if I put a white background, the page would look too bright and I don't want that I want the magazine to be serious and formal and not too playful.
I thought this contents page looked very original and fun and I thought of putting some of these features on my contents page.
This is the information of what I want to add on my magazine contents page.
Double page spread
I changed the design of my double page spread many times because I didn't think it looked professional but at the moment, I am happy with how it looks. Blow is the process I went through when I was making my double page spread.
The picture above shows the process I went through when I was making the double page spread. As you can see, I changed the colour of the page because it was too bright and you couldn't see the writing clearly. I changed the positioning of the models as I thought that they didn't look good the way they were and they didn't look professional. I deleted 2 of the pictures. The first picture I deleted because it looked too blurry and didn't stand out. The next picture I deleted was the picture of Piyana and I deleted it because the picture had too much sun light on her face which didn't look nice and when I tried to reduce the light, it reduced light on the whole page so everything was going darker therefore I added a new picture of Piyana which I thought was perfect for the story as it was her being the bigger person and walking away from the situation in the story whereas I was being big headed and in my opinion, I think the poses show it.
Contents page
I find that the contents page stands out a lot although maybe I should change the background colour as I don't want to stick with a black background for all my pages. On the other hand, I find that the black makes everything stand out and if I put a white background, the page would look too bright and I don't want that I want the magazine to be serious and formal and not too playful.
This is the information of what I want to add on my magazine contents page.
Double page spread
I changed the design of my double page spread many times because I didn't think it looked professional but at the moment, I am happy with how it looks. Blow is the process I went through when I was making my double page spread.
The picture above shows the process I went through when I was making the double page spread. As you can see, I changed the colour of the page because it was too bright and you couldn't see the writing clearly. I changed the positioning of the models as I thought that they didn't look good the way they were and they didn't look professional. I deleted 2 of the pictures. The first picture I deleted because it looked too blurry and didn't stand out. The next picture I deleted was the picture of Piyana and I deleted it because the picture had too much sun light on her face which didn't look nice and when I tried to reduce the light, it reduced light on the whole page so everything was going darker therefore I added a new picture of Piyana which I thought was perfect for the story as it was her being the bigger person and walking away from the situation in the story whereas I was being big headed and in my opinion, I think the poses show it.
